In the past few weeks My class and I have been creating advertisments. We had to make a slide about selling our vehicles in the news paper. We used less words so that we wouldn't be charged too much.
Hi Reed I'm Jordan from Edmund Hillary School. Thank you for commenting on my blog I really appreciate it. If you really bought that car people will probably get jealous because you'll have the best car out.
hi my name is Apollo from Waikowhai Primary School i have been trying to convincing someone to buy a tv. i rely like your blog and i wood like you to see my one. https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1bJvzQxlDI67Sv25fAGenNrwiTrJGeinXZ4GyMbuTy8s/edit
Hi there, my name is Jacob, and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai Primary. Something you did really well was being careful about how many words you used, but at the same time being descriptive. ? Maybe next time you could be a bit more descriptive, as I have no idea what a engine blower is. As it happens we are doing advertising in class too. One thing that will help is the idea of using less words, so people can read it quickly.If you would like to see my learning, my blog is wpsjacobw.blogspot.co.nz . Bye!
Hi my name is Saleh. I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like the way you used bright colours. It reminded me about the advertisement that we are doing for our gala day. Next time you can put a photo of your bike.
Hi my mane is Rua .I am form Waikowhai primary school . I like the way you explained details about your bike. It reminded me about the advertisement that we are doing for our gala day . Next time please put a photo of your bike. Please check my blog http://wpsruat.blogspot.co.nz/ .
Hi my name is Paula from Waikowhai Primary school.Your bike sale is cool because you told us lots of cool and new information I did not know. I like how you are telling people to come and buy your bike. Maybe next time add some more information about why your bike sale went so well.
Feel free to come and check out my blog at http://wpspaulala.blogspot.co.nz/.
Hi there my name is Emelio,and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai primary. Somthing you did really well was being careful about how many words you used,but at the same time being descriptive. maybe next time you could be a bit more descriptive, as I have no idea what a engine blower is.As it happens we are doing advertising in class too.one thing that will help is the idea of using less words,so people can read it quickly.if you would like to check my blog out my blog is wpsEmeliot.blogspot.co.nz. BYE!!!
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hi i am reed from paroa school i really like the 1968 chvrolte camaro i will buy it
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DeleteHi Reed I'm Jordan from Edmund Hillary School. Thank you for commenting on my blog I really appreciate it. If you really bought that car people will probably get jealous because you'll have the best car out.
Deletehi my name is Apollo from Waikowhai Primary School i have been trying to
ReplyDeleteconvincing someone to buy a tv. i rely like your blog and i wood like you to see my one. https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1bJvzQxlDI67Sv25fAGenNrwiTrJGeinXZ4GyMbuTy8s/edit
Hi there, my name is Jacob, and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai Primary. Something you did really well was being careful about how many words you used, but at the same time being descriptive. ? Maybe next time you could be a bit more descriptive, as I have no idea what a engine blower is. As it happens we are doing advertising in class too. One thing that will help is the idea of using less words, so people can read it quickly.If you would like to see my learning, my blog is wpsjacobw.blogspot.co.nz . Bye!
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Saleh. I am from Waikowhai Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used bright colours. It reminded me about the advertisement that we are doing for our gala day. Next time you can put a photo of your bike.
Hi my mane is Rua .I am form Waikowhai primary school .
ReplyDeleteI like the way you explained details about your bike.
It reminded me about the advertisement that we are doing for our gala day . Next time please put a photo of your bike. Please check my blog http://wpsruat.blogspot.co.nz/ .
Hi my name is Paula from Waikowhai Primary school.Your bike sale is cool because you told us lots of cool and new information I did not know. I like how you are telling people to come and buy your bike. Maybe next time add some more information about why your bike sale went so well.
ReplyDeleteFeel free to come and check out my blog at http://wpspaulala.blogspot.co.nz/.
Hi there my name is Emelio,and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai primary. Somthing you did really well was being careful about how many words you used,but at the same time being descriptive. maybe next time you could be a bit more descriptive, as I have no idea what a engine blower is.As it happens we are doing advertising in class too.one thing that will help is the idea of using less words,so people can read it quickly.if you would like to check my blog out my blog is wpsEmeliot.blogspot.co.nz. BYE!!!
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